Friday, September 23, 2011

"The Boys of WInter"

1. His standup was when he was sitting on the bleachers with the fans.
2. In the middle o your story, because the standup is a good transition from one loacation to another.
3. 3-5 main key points.
4. the age of the team members, how in shape Bakewell is, how many years they have been playing

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